Comments for As the Moon Climbs

Comment on Always Have an Exit Strategy by Terri

Terri — Sat, 18 May 2013 04:22:05 +0000

Very well done, congrats on your win! Twas awesome.

Comment on Earth’s Top Super Model by Dad

Dad — Fri, 17 May 2013 19:32:56 +0000

I’m an Astra fan already…

Comment on Tourist Trap by Dad

Dad — Fri, 17 May 2013 19:26:44 +0000

Great story. Constructed well, no deficiencies. Very entertaining. Could be a pilot for a series…

Comment on Tourist Trap by Paige Williams

Paige Williams — Sun, 21 Apr 2013 01:02:28 +0000

Wow! That was an awesome story. The pacing was good, the descriptions were detailed yet beautiful.

This is my fav:
“Hell was a jagged stretch of black limestone spires and ridges that flooded at high tide with brackish green water, like a miniature version of something from Dante’s nightmares except for the blazing blue sky overhead.”

Love the ending too!

I’m looking forward to reading more of your work.

Comment on Pompeii Graffiti by Kim Nelson

Kim Nelson — Fri, 22 Feb 2013 17:17:48 +0000

Indeed they have not. You have taken a very different perspective for your response to Anna’s prompt, and I quite appreciate your creativity as well as the history imparted. A good change of pace.

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/02/22/it-is-written-vehicles-of-the-word/

Comment on Behold: Forged by Fate! by Amalia

Amalia — Fri, 22 Feb 2013 16:44:32 +0000

I especially appreciate the emerging like athena from the head of Zeus line! haha. Thanks for sharing!!

Comment on Pompeii Graffiti by deb

deb — Fri, 22 Feb 2013 08:50:36 +0000

this made me laff out loud several times….how delightful! Can you imangine a rogue Roman rousabout trying to chisel out a message of disobedience over some Council declaration in the dead of the night with a chisel and hammer and lantern??? More dangerous than the gladiator games…

Those stupid patricans…why so Serious???

Thanks for this ….i loved it…

Comment on Pompeii Graffiti by Susan L Daniels

Susan L Daniels — Fri, 22 Feb 2013 04:30:32 +0000

Valerie–I love this. Shows we have not changed much. Sad, too.

Comment on Pompeii Graffiti by lucychili

lucychili — Fri, 22 Feb 2013 04:17:46 +0000

some themes are eternal =)

Comment on Pompeii Graffiti by Gretchen Leary

Gretchen Leary — Fri, 22 Feb 2013 04:11:56 +0000

I like this. Goes to show how little we’ve really changed over time!